Re: Shoedance dialogue

[Scott Telford <st@epcc.ed.ac.uk>]

One or two other corrections....

> From: pptjc@vaxk.bton.ac.uk (It's in the trees... It's coming...)
> Subject: Re: Shoedance dialogue

> In article <m0q2dSG-000AFVC@zoodle.robin.de>, uli@zoodle.RoBIN.de (Ulrich Grepel
> ) writes

> >M: What am I here? I don't[?] want[?] to be here. I don't understand how this has 
> >
> >   happened.
> 
> K: What the hell is going on - who are you?		[correction]

"What the hell is going on - look, who are you?"

> >M: There was an accident, a big fire. I looked[?] over[?] me, my hands are all
> >   burned and blistered. There was so much smoke I couldn't believe it. I could, I

"I looked down, my hands were all burned and blistered"

> >K: How can I help you?
> >M: I can't use my hands. I can't use my hands, I have to get back ... back ...
> >   home ... There is only one moment left for me to return. And it lies in your

"There is only one more [way?] left for me..." (?)

> >   hands now.
> >K: Don't worry, you'll get home!

"Don't worry, we'll get you home"

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