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From: Peter Byrne Manchester <PMANCHESTER@ccmail.sunysb.edu>
Date: Tue, 16 Apr 1991 23:34 EDT
Subject: B-Sides lyrics/NTT
Cc: pmanchester@ccmail.sunysb.edu
Larry Hernandez mentioned--and Ed Suranyi quickly put it right--the version of the line from "Not This Time" printed in _KBComplete_ that uses the word "ship" for one reason or another. What I found interesting in Larry's post of actual lyrics for the B-sides from the JPN BOX was that it confirms the more general fact, that those lyrics seem likely to have come from either _KBComplete_ or from wherever IT got them. And my question is: anybody know? To stay with the particular song "Not This Time," about which there was some correspondence that I provoked more than a year ago, the thing that interests me about the line as Larry cites it is not at all just the (totally obvious and in no way unlikely) actual next-to-last word of the line but the fact that in other ways it plainly is not a transcription of the performed lyric. The whole line is SUNG "To keep me going and to keep the shit away," which is in other ways as well from _KBComplete_. A question and a project: Q. Are we to presume that _KBComplete_ or JPN BOX have consulted, say, the published sheet music? Or are their lyrics too based on "best takes" on an admittedly difficult song? Project: in either case, what lyrics do those of us who are participating in an edition of the B-sides lyrics want to use? If (through some consensus) we should agree that what Novercia published and what Kate sings differ, what do we do? If, in fact, it is down to our ears finally, then the potential for extent texts to be mistaken seems to produce a responsibility. Since it is no longer just my own transcription, but benefits from _KBComplete_ as well as particular corrections from Doug Alan the other year, and ALSO because 'ship' aside, I can make no sense of the available lyrics anyway, which seem to differ significantly all over the place from what I hear, allow me to share my *draft* (please) of the best version I have come up with. To me, it seems emotionally far more coherent than the printed version--but it differs in logically consequential ways ('sensitive', not 'insensitive'; 'feel you', not 'fear you'), and I would value comment. D R A F T NOT THIS TIME Kate Bush Oh with the mind that renders everything sensitive What chance do I have to be here Put an end, put an end Put an end to every dream When you're near I feel you And I forget myself Not this time baby Not this time Not this time baby I dunno why I give in but I do every time And here I am a'wondering why I'm doing it again Toor-ee-ah Toor-ee-oh Toor-ee-ah Toor-ee-oh That's what I say To keep me going and to keep the shit away I don't know what it is Every time you're near I feel you And I forget myself No, not this time baby Not this time out Not this time Not this time C'mon, we all sing .............................................................................. pmanchester@ccmail.sunysb,edu "C'mon, we all sing!" pmanches@sbccmail.bitnet Peter Manchester