Demos line change suggestion

[Dwaine Marvick <dmarv@ucla.edu>]

Happily browsing through parts of the immense and
brilliant Gaffaweb IED noticed another of his myriad
errors.  He thought this one had been identified earlier
and corrected, but as it still appears in Gaffaweb, he
hastens to call attention to it.  

Line 10 of "Carmilla" (sorry, IED's not yet at ease
with the more appropriate Phoenix titles): shouldn't 
"Tying, dying, flowers..." more properly be "Tying garlic
flowers...."?  This makes more sense for the narrative,
and once IED thought of it he couldn't hear it any other
way.  What does anyone else think?

-- Andrew Marvick (IED)
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Thanks.