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Demo lyrics: While Davy Dozed

From: btd@carina.cray.com (Bryan Dongray)
Date: Mon, 5 Feb 1996 22:15:34 -0600 (CST)
Subject: Demo lyrics: While Davy Dozed
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> Your face seemed radiant.   [radianced?]
> The walls ---------,   [to stear?]     <---- VERY DIFFICULT!!
> With a crack emerge.
> As I held you.

This one is just so impossible to make out, but I do like Emmy's
version of this:
	The wall with the ceiling with the crack remembers
Sentance fine, syntax good, meaning and imagery perfectly sound.

She gets my vote!

			Bryan Dongray